miércoles, 14 de diciembre de 2011

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in mi opinion social justice as the way of respect for other people, poeple as they aree treated by the goverment,  the goverment does for them, also how people are treated they treat each other if to When they have a problem they help each other and also when there protest are something  about 8 that people they do not agree and also  that very few people have much money and much people don´t have money , and also the politics stolen the money of the study the kids to dont have much money, y also the poor families can not pay the pribate school

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  1. THERE ARE MANY IDEAS IN ONE JUST PARAGRAPH. TAKE EACH IDEA, GIVE SUPPORTING IDEAS TO EACH ONE, MAYBE EACH IDEA IN A PARAGRAPH. CLARIFY THEM.
    CORRECT THE MISTAKES IN BRACKETS.

    In mi opinion social justice (as) IS the way of respect (for) otherS (people)(,) (poeple) PEOPLE as they aree treated by the goverment, the goverment WORKS for them(,) also (how) AS people are treated , they treat each other. (if to) SO When they have a problem they help each other and also when (there) THEY protest THERE are something about (8) ??? (that) people (they) do not agree and also (that) very few people (have) HAVING much money and (much) MANY WHO (people) don´t have ANY money , and also the politics (stolen) STEAL the money (of the study the kids to dont have much money) FOR THE EDUCATION, (y) AND also the poor families can not pay the priVate school

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  2. (Andres Espitia, ACEA

    I agree, because for me social justice is a way of the rights, so when we talk about social unjustice, we are talking of a way to broken this rights.

    You have the start of the idea, because the social justice is: the same oportunity to study for all, the same respect to every body , ETC

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  3. Social justice in my opinion is a combination of social, economics and everything is around the human beings.

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  4. I think that the goverment has been corrupted and steal the money that must be used in health,education,security and also to upgrade the city so is injustice that they take the money for them and don't help the people.

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